Bill
On Mon, 29 Apr 1996 MalNechis@AOL.COM wrote:
> Date: Mon, 29 Apr 1996 12:27:38 -0400
> From: MalNechis@AOL.COM
> To: watpa@westnet.com
> Subject: Re: NII AWARD ENTRY
>
> Bill, as usual you've crafted an excellent document ... one that deserves
> reading beyond the awards committee.
>
> I have only two very minor suggestions:
>
> B5 (second paragraph):
>
> I wonder whether the sentence would read better if the words "centralized
> media" and "Westchester" were sepatated by a period rather than a dash.
>
> B.9 (third paragraph)
>
> It might be a little clearer to rephrase " ... information to a large,
> diverse and dispursed county population."
>